Elevator Pitch No2


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  1. Collin,
    You seem well practiced and enthusiastic in this pitch. It would be even clearer to your readers if the volume was not as low and you talked a little slower. I like your business idea, but wonder how you will compete with free study spaces offered already in the college setting. I think this could be accomplished if your space provided excellent customer service and accommodations.

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  2. Hey Collin,

    I really enjoyed how confident you appeared in this pitch. You came off as very informed and comfortable in your pitch which is awesome! I like how you spoke of future plans to expand your service and restated what your goal/mission is. I like how you speak of your communal workspace as if it exists and is just as successful as I know it can be! This allows for a more dynamic, enthusiastic pitch. Great job!

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